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I Made a Group!
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So I was bored... And so I made a group... So you can join! Invite your friends, your family, your pets and your plants! (No rocks acceptable.) Please join! The first 2-3 requests will be accepted as admins but after that you can be a member. I MIGHT add more than 2-3 but you know... meh.. Please join so it can get popular because I'm trying to help people's art get noticed so let's help each other! Yeah? Ok so yeah just share it to everyone you know in DeviantArt!!
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Hunger Games Alternate Ending
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So I have to write an alternate ending for the Hunger Games book and here's what I have so far, is it good? Should I change something? Oh god please help me with all this work TT ^ TT
Hunger Games Alternate Ending
By: ME xD
Suddenly, I hear the canon, I freeze. "Peeta?" I say slowly at first. Is that canon for Peeta? No, it can't be… He´s just a few meters away! Next thing I know I´m running back to where I last saw Peeta. "Peeta! Peeta!" I can´t stop myself from screaming, I just keep running. I reach the place where Peeta was supposed to be. The roots are in a neat pile on his jacket but where is he? My thoughts are interrupted by a scream. "Katniss!" No… Not this again… "Peeta!!" I can´t let Peeta go, I might have let Rue go but not Peeta and much less, will I let him go by Cato.
I reach an open area where I think the screams are coming from but I don´t hear them anymore when I reach the middle of the meadow. Where´s Peeta? Or more importantly, is he really in danger? I see a hovercraft about 300 meters away from me but the body is not Peeta, it´s Foxface. For a moment I´m relieved, Peeta´s safe, I think, consoling myself. But the screams come again. This time, they are longer and less clear… I follow the sounds without screaming this time, I´m thinking this may be a trap of some sort but the screams sound so much like Peeta´s. I keep running, Bow and arrow ready on hand. The screams now sound very long and… they sound like… a recording! This wasn´t Cato´s plan, it was the Gamemakers´s!!
I run away from the sound this time knowing now that it is a trap. The screams don´t sound like my name anymore but more like a screech from some kind of bird, probably another mutation from the Gamemakers. I find myself again in the open area. And looking more into it, it reminds me of home. I stop running for a second. The air is passing through my fingers, my hair getting blown by it. This is nice, I think, this is a good place where I could die, I haven´t found Peeta anyways, he is strong now, he´s got a chance against Cato. Yes, I could die here, feeling so close to home… I´m feeling sleepy now so I lay down on the grass. It´s so soft… I like it here… I doze off at the sounds of the screeches, every time sounding even closer and angrier. Next time I wake up on a… tree? How did I get here? I try to move but I´m tied up and with a big ache in the leg and stomach. I look at my stomach first. The shock is big, you can see that it was a bird that was chasing me and that it almost ate half of my stomach. Blood stains are on my skin still, blood is still coming out. I look at my leg now, bloodstains on my pants, that´s not a good sign. Still, I roll up the pants and see that even though the small bite has affected the leg and it´s halfway and you can see the bone. My facial expression changes when I see Peeta climbing the tree.
"Peeta.. Peeta is that you?" I say shaky.
"Hm? Oh Katniss! You´re awake!" Peeta says, his voice sounding in surprise.
"Yes but what happened? How did you even get me up here? My stomach and leg… The mutt…" I say having a few flashbacks.
"Oh well I followed the screeches and I found you laying down in a meadow with a bird almost on top of you. I panicked I don´t even know how I did it but I saved you and got you to a tree. The bird was eating you; I think that´s why your stomach and leg are injured. I´m not much of a doctor so I haven´t been much help." He says, his voice sounds… relaxed… so different from his personality, he would´ve been worried even after me waking up…
"Wait how again did you got me up here? And how long have I been asleep?" I ask.
"Well, since the incident it has been around 2 days." He says with a little smirk. "Sleepy head."
I don´t laugh. "I was unconscious Peeta, not my fault. You didn´t answer my question, how did you get me up here? Your leg is still in recovery." I once again ask, I´m getting suspicious.
"Never mind how I got you up, you need to lay down, I think I´ve got something that can help your stomach, I found it in your belt." He says pushing the topic away.
"Peeta… It must´ve been so hard, I mean with your leg still hurting…" I reach up ready to give him a little kiss.
"Y-yeah, I have to get some more of the medicine…" he says this while jumping off the branch.
I'm still laying down when he returns. "Did anything interesting happen while I was unconscious? Did you get Cato?" I say before any other topic comes into hand.
"No, only Foxface. The medicine was not working and I don't know what else to give you so we'll just have to win this thing and get to the Capitol." He says a little too serious.
"Oh… ok... So I guess we'll have to get moving..." I say a little disappointed because I wanted to rest for a little bit more.
"Yes."
"Are you ok Peeta?"
"Yes."
"You sound so serious… You haven´t given me a kiss since I woke up…"
"I gave you enough kisses when you were asleep."
"How do I get off?"
"Don´t know, you figure it out"
This is when I notice, this isn't Peeta. Peeta does know more about medicine and would've done more in 2 days to help my stomach and my leg. He wouldn't jump off the branch; his leg is still ill and barely knows how to climb a tree. But much less… would he refuse two of my kisses... This person, this version of Peeta, is not the real one, this… this is Cato disguised as Peeta.
After a long time, we are both finally on the ground and I´m making a huge effort on walking. Now I know that this is Cato, I'm a little worried of Peeta. What actually happened?
"How about we go to the Cornucopia? That's probably where he is, you know, close to the lake and all." I suggest.
"Yeah, ok." He says.
Hunger Games Alternate Ending
By: ME xD
Suddenly, I hear the canon, I freeze. "Peeta?" I say slowly at first. Is that canon for Peeta? No, it can't be… He´s just a few meters away! Next thing I know I´m running back to where I last saw Peeta. "Peeta! Peeta!" I can´t stop myself from screaming, I just keep running. I reach the place where Peeta was supposed to be. The roots are in a neat pile on his jacket but where is he? My thoughts are interrupted by a scream. "Katniss!" No… Not this again… "Peeta!!" I can´t let Peeta go, I might have let Rue go but not Peeta and much less, will I let him go by Cato.
I reach an open area where I think the screams are coming from but I don´t hear them anymore when I reach the middle of the meadow. Where´s Peeta? Or more importantly, is he really in danger? I see a hovercraft about 300 meters away from me but the body is not Peeta, it´s Foxface. For a moment I´m relieved, Peeta´s safe, I think, consoling myself. But the screams come again. This time, they are longer and less clear… I follow the sounds without screaming this time, I´m thinking this may be a trap of some sort but the screams sound so much like Peeta´s. I keep running, Bow and arrow ready on hand. The screams now sound very long and… they sound like… a recording! This wasn´t Cato´s plan, it was the Gamemakers´s!!
I run away from the sound this time knowing now that it is a trap. The screams don´t sound like my name anymore but more like a screech from some kind of bird, probably another mutation from the Gamemakers. I find myself again in the open area. And looking more into it, it reminds me of home. I stop running for a second. The air is passing through my fingers, my hair getting blown by it. This is nice, I think, this is a good place where I could die, I haven´t found Peeta anyways, he is strong now, he´s got a chance against Cato. Yes, I could die here, feeling so close to home… I´m feeling sleepy now so I lay down on the grass. It´s so soft… I like it here… I doze off at the sounds of the screeches, every time sounding even closer and angrier. Next time I wake up on a… tree? How did I get here? I try to move but I´m tied up and with a big ache in the leg and stomach. I look at my stomach first. The shock is big, you can see that it was a bird that was chasing me and that it almost ate half of my stomach. Blood stains are on my skin still, blood is still coming out. I look at my leg now, bloodstains on my pants, that´s not a good sign. Still, I roll up the pants and see that even though the small bite has affected the leg and it´s halfway and you can see the bone. My facial expression changes when I see Peeta climbing the tree.
"Peeta.. Peeta is that you?" I say shaky.
"Hm? Oh Katniss! You´re awake!" Peeta says, his voice sounding in surprise.
"Yes but what happened? How did you even get me up here? My stomach and leg… The mutt…" I say having a few flashbacks.
"Oh well I followed the screeches and I found you laying down in a meadow with a bird almost on top of you. I panicked I don´t even know how I did it but I saved you and got you to a tree. The bird was eating you; I think that´s why your stomach and leg are injured. I´m not much of a doctor so I haven´t been much help." He says, his voice sounds… relaxed… so different from his personality, he would´ve been worried even after me waking up…
"Wait how again did you got me up here? And how long have I been asleep?" I ask.
"Well, since the incident it has been around 2 days." He says with a little smirk. "Sleepy head."
I don´t laugh. "I was unconscious Peeta, not my fault. You didn´t answer my question, how did you get me up here? Your leg is still in recovery." I once again ask, I´m getting suspicious.
"Never mind how I got you up, you need to lay down, I think I´ve got something that can help your stomach, I found it in your belt." He says pushing the topic away.
"Peeta… It must´ve been so hard, I mean with your leg still hurting…" I reach up ready to give him a little kiss.
"Y-yeah, I have to get some more of the medicine…" he says this while jumping off the branch.
I'm still laying down when he returns. "Did anything interesting happen while I was unconscious? Did you get Cato?" I say before any other topic comes into hand.
"No, only Foxface. The medicine was not working and I don't know what else to give you so we'll just have to win this thing and get to the Capitol." He says a little too serious.
"Oh… ok... So I guess we'll have to get moving..." I say a little disappointed because I wanted to rest for a little bit more.
"Yes."
"Are you ok Peeta?"
"Yes."
"You sound so serious… You haven´t given me a kiss since I woke up…"
"I gave you enough kisses when you were asleep."
"How do I get off?"
"Don´t know, you figure it out"
This is when I notice, this isn't Peeta. Peeta does know more about medicine and would've done more in 2 days to help my stomach and my leg. He wouldn't jump off the branch; his leg is still ill and barely knows how to climb a tree. But much less… would he refuse two of my kisses... This person, this version of Peeta, is not the real one, this… this is Cato disguised as Peeta.
After a long time, we are both finally on the ground and I´m making a huge effort on walking. Now I know that this is Cato, I'm a little worried of Peeta. What actually happened?
"How about we go to the Cornucopia? That's probably where he is, you know, close to the lake and all." I suggest.
"Yeah, ok." He says.
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